I love the way this video was made! The judge really helped determine your skills. You have great eye contact and can set your calf up without issue. Some pointers to help you improve would be more arm extension. You want to make your presence known and when you make big gestures that is how you develop a bigger ring presence. Personally, I make a smooth stroke on the brisket, not the belly with the show stick. That is a personal preference but slower and smoother strokes with the stick go a long way.